Schafdawg's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Universithing: Pilot]

Awesome, but the Nyancat music...

It was awesome. Great animation, good voice acting, awesome plot. I can't wait to see this series.

Kreid responds:

Starting in about 12 weeks! Gunna put some stuff on DA in the time being

[maxium madness(not finsh)]

A few suggestions, if you don't mind

First, please stop looping it (I didn't rate it down because of it, but it still annoys me). Second, use some more frames. Third, mindless violence is good, but it needs a storyline. Fourth, please make sure it is "finish" before submitting it, there is no point submitting unfinished work unless it is REALLY good and just a preview of a really long and really awesome thing. And last, use correct grammar in your title. And even more last, the music was really bad quality and just sounded like the action, mindless. Fix these things when this is "finish" please.

Madnesscrazy123 responds:

I Couldn't Be Bothered to finish it but i'm making one that will Finsh

[LL - 99 Red Balloons]

Nice, but a little strange...

I don't understand the whole lock thing, and it would have been better without the lock people, but it was still awesome. I was going to complain about how choosing 99 Red Balloons was a bad choice, and instead should have been Neun und Neunzig Luftballons, but he sang in German for a bit, so that made up for it, as German songs are always more epic than their English version. This is the second lock movie I saw, not counting one that sucked, and although I don't understand the whole lock thing, it was good anyways.

LeafLock responds:

Learn some history. :3

http://www.newgrounds.com/collection/
clockcrew

http://www.newgrounds.com/collection/
locklegion

Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Nyan Nyan Lemon]

Dude, make something original

I don't care much for nyan cat. It is you people who ruined the meme. This isn't creative, this isn't original, you put a lemon on a nyan cat gif... which takes no skill whatsoever. Stop spamming Newgrounds with this crap. I hate when a good, or in this case somewhat lame, meme gets ruined by spammers on the internet. At least make the lemon move with nyancat, but I can see that you don't want to take the effort to do so. Please blam all of the crud that ruins memes. And stop creating crap like this.

LMNZ responds:

wooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[[ll]whoo`s rupee]

REPLAY? EDN

Not comedic in any way. Jokes and comedic timing help a lot in movies... I don't know why the lock holes are speaking... or why I could neither hear nor understand them. He dies at the end, but what else? Endings need more than explosions to be good. Make voices understandable, add background music, add more action and jokes, and don't misspell end, spelling makes it seem like you put some effort into it. Why is the rupee talking to a strawberry anyways? I didn't understand this at all...

nutboxz responds:

do you know ANYTHING about the clock crew?!or lock legion

[Nyan Kat!]

Dude

This isn't even creative. I have seen more Nyan cat crap that actually is more interesting. This probably took a few minutes to cut and paste the nyan cat and the face. I agree with you author man, HOW DID THIS PASS? This is a sad day in Newgrounds, when crap like this has a score over 1/5, let alone 1.44. Please join my noble quest to keep useless, boring crap off of Newgrounds and keep it an interesting site without being cluttered with crap. I commend you for helping me with my point by creating such garbage. I have spoken.

Sevkat responds:

good luck with that, faggot

[Epic orange take a trip]

Really?

I don't have much to say. That was not amazein' (which is spelled amazin' by the way) it wasn't even that good. Not much was animated, just a simple motion of the same guy jumping around and a changing background. My friend did better on a high school animation (not a final). This was not comedic, clever, or well drawn. Not to be negative, but frankly I can't see anything good about it. No storyline, one crappy spoken line, obnoxious music, random pictures that aren't even animated, and bad animation. Sorry for my hate, but I don't like to lie and I don't wanna see more crap filling up Newgrounds...

mcneil32 responds:

yeah I am sorry dude I really just put it out there so my friend could see it because when I export in flash it never comes out right (stuff like doesn't so I need a place 2 put the swf. If i could export it as a quicktime I would have put it on my youtube channel instead.

[Flash Morph]

Meh

It isn't bad, just not good enough to be Newgrounds material. Newgrounds is about cool stuff and comedy with flash. It looks somewhat cool, but isn't interesting or anything. A simple storyline would have done the job, with stick figures if you really need to. I don't create flash because I can't do much better than this video, so I stick with voice acting and creating the story. Don't let this review discourage you though, I just don't think that this is for Newgrounds.

clayyalc responds:

Yeah this is old ive gotten much much better.

[The Many Kirbys Collab]

It was alright.

Some were really good, others sucked. One thing that bothered me was the fact that some Waddle Dees had mouths. They don't have mouths ever, they just absorb food through their face. UFO and Ninja were arguably my favorite. My least favorite had to be spaghetti or something.

FlashfireEX responds:

Fair enough.

[Night of the Redead]

Great job

I didn't really like the animation, but the Zelda references were great. You should have made the moon the Majora's Mask skull moon, but a normal moon was just fine. I recognized the guy as the Gibdo dude with his daughter before the ending, so it was kind of predictable. The ending wasn't a normal happy ending, so that made it better. The story line was pretty good too. Keep up the nice work.

Eastbeast responds:

Thanks I don't like cliched ending's either thx for the review :)